Here is the original
and here is my edit.
AMP and tweaked a few of the settings. I mainly used it to help keep a clean edit. I then lightened the skin under the eyes, brightened and sharpened the eyes and tweaked the contrast to the whole picture. When it was all done I flattened the image and sharpened it a bit.
I wanted to keep the picture natural and just brighten eyes and brighten up the pic overall. Hope you enjoy!